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订正我的英语作文,谢谢~ Henry noticed a smiling police rush out of a shop with a bag full of money and(run)towards a waiting car.Henry felt that the police was very strange.He acted quickly.He(called)out to the police and(the police was wanted to stop by him)(THIS SENTENCE IS ABSOLUTELY OUT OF MY UNDERSTANDING).When he found out that the police was an actor,Henry got such a surprise.The police felt far more(surprised)than Henry because he was never considered a thief by anybody(before).besides the improper using of words and tenses,i get totally confused by the\"police\"and the actor.logically,being a police he can not be a actor at the same time,so personally i recommend you use\"a man in a police suit\"instead of\"police\".
一篇英文阅读。求答案,我要订正 BAAD