英语句子改错 没有语法错误，但是读起来给人一种层套关系混乱的感觉，把一个从句提取出来，是句子简化一下就好As you mentioned，what's the most inportant？do you think 不需要再要了，加上也没有意义啊，都已经说了是\"你说的\"，再问一.
请求帮忙写一封英文信件 希望有人帮我写封信，具体我会自己修改。如果是翻译软件就请不要回答了。 主要 请求帮忙写一封英文信件 希望有人帮我写封信，具体我会自己修改。如果是翻译软件就请不要回答了。主要 请求帮忙写一封英文信件希望有人帮我写封信，具体我会自己修改。。
请求英语作文修改 哈哈 碰到我算你运气好了.我来看看哦.这里有几个建议：1.你的第3句话跟第4句话连在一起会比较好一点，比较顺口.中间加个\"and就好了，改了以后是：I got up at seven o' clock A.M.and I bought a exquisite（exquisite=精美）present.2.你的第5句话“Than I went with my mother to my foreign friend's house”有两个地方错，分别是这句话的第一个字“than”要改成“then”（这两个字很容易搞混）.第二个错，就是顺序不对，它应该是“then I went to my foreign friend's house with my mother”.3.“I gave tihs present for him at nine at 9.00 o' clock A.M.”这句话 应该改为：“i gave this present to him at 9：00 o'clock”.这句话里面有很多多余的，还有一个字用错了.因为，有了\"at nine\"，就不需要9.00 A.M.或者o'clock了.其实说9点 有3种方法，分别是：9 o'clock，9A.M.，还有\"at nine4.\"My mother and his mother were talking abot some studies\"这句话只是拼错而已，abot要改为about5.\"He said his favourite hobbies is play the piano and play badminton应该改为\"he said his favourite hobbies are playing piano and badminton\".记住，1个的东西就要用\"is\"，2个。
