求英语大神指导一下这句话有语法错误吗？怎么改？
英语作文，帮忙看一下错误，顺便指导一下 我来献丑一下~I am Li Hua，Secretary of the Science Department of Three Georges High School's Students' Committee.We sincerely invite you to take part in our school's Science Art Day.In addition，we hope you can give a speech with regards to 'How Science Can Be Related to Art'.There will also be a Teacher-Student Party at the end of the event and we hope you will able to attend that as well.Please honour us with your presence and we sincerely await your favourable
想知道下列英语句子语法有没有错误（求指导） 首先说有语法错误。looking out window 应为 looking out of window，look out是不及物动词短语，后边不能接宾语，而这句话的意思是：我透过窗户向外看了几个小时/我向窗外看了几个小时，所以要用look out of。
英语翻译 On etiquette education in kindergarten Author：Zhou Jing Instructor：Hlin Xia Abstract：child care during a person of good moral character formation of a critical period in this period，the earl.
英语翻译 1.My is not very good，if I have any problem of my grammar，please tell me，thanks.2.Please forgive me if I`m not doing properly，this maybe the cultur differences between east and west.因为是口语，所以没有必要写得好像文章一样，所以没有用到你所说的礼仪等词祝夏令营开心，顺利
求英语高手看看. 很高兴为你解答.保证正确率~。【解析】：你的句子是错误的，因为如果你的那个 which 是引导定语从句的话，is 和 make 是双谓语了，而且 make 还是原型，更是错上加错.make sb do sth，所以 feeling 也是错误的.整个句子完全是不可言喻的错误。句子主干的谓语都没得。【改正】：Dreams mean insisting on things that make you happy.梦想就是坚持让你觉得幸福的事.mean doing 意味着.insist on 坚持 that 引导作 things 的后置定语.
